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This is another new poem of mine. see if you like it too! :D enjoy

In The Darkness
By: Ashley Loyd


In the darkness …
You belong to me.

In the darkness…
You can’t escape me.

You move swiftly not making a sound,
And not knowing I can see everywhere
You go, every move you make.

I sit and watch you…waiting to make
My move, while you’re running around
Like a mouse lost in a maze.

In the darkness, you are now lost…
Now paralyzed.

You give into my space. You know
There’s only room for one.
You finally give into the darkness
You finally have admitted defeat…
I have won.


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:) nice, very nice....i like... :dance:

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interesting

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Cool, it's very... dark. :D

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lol yes, keep all the depressed and suicidal people away from this forum!!! its a good poem though!!

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highly doubt if anyone kills theirself over a poem I wrote...especially on this forum. haha. BUT thanx! :D

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Red Squirrel wrote: Cool, it's very... dark. :D

wow, Red! you cease to amaze me. YOU'RE SUCHA SMART PERSON! :P
just messin' with ya

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unbreakable wrote: highly doubt if anyone kills theirself over a poem I wrote...especially on this forum. haha. BUT thanx! :D
hahahaha...GG might :P

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maybe...hrmmm...

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Minnie wrote:
unbreakable wrote: highly doubt if anyone kills theirself over a poem I wrote...especially on this forum. haha. BUT thanx! :D
hahahaha...GG might :P
hahaha! :goalguarder: there he goes

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hahahahha :lol:

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crap... <_<

someone is gonna take heat for this one. .... :ph34r:

ahhhh oh well :lol:

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:lol:


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should we have a funeral for him?

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depends..how many ppl would show up?

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I hate to go to funerals..but just for GG i would go :wub:

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me 2. I hate funerals too. I hope I've been to my last one for a while my last one did me over..it was my fathers.

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unbreakable wrote: me 2. I hate funerals too. I hope I've been to my last one for a while my last one did me over..it was my fathers.
:( i'm so sorry...i can't imagine how difficult that would be. I have lost people i been close to but no that close to my heart. i guess it's a part of life but man....again i'm so sorry for you loss. :)

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poems are amazing, just the other day at work we were talking about authors. Mostly people like Edgar Allan Poe who's work was dark and how tragic their lives were but if it wasn't for the tragic acts and events in their lives we would be without the great works from such authors.

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VictorEM83 wrote: poems are amazing, just the other day at work we were talking about authors. Mostly people like Edgar Allan Poe who's work was dark and how tragic their lives were but if it wasn't for the tragic acts and events in their lives we would be without the great works from such authors.
You said it! I love Edgar A Poe!!! Him and Nathanial Hawthorne. They are my two favorites.

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yeah edgar allan poe has some great poems and stories

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yea!!!!!

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After I watched a movie last nite (the Aristocrats) I had a total wow moment how really disturbing some of the people who give us some of the greatest works. Being so crude, vile, and disturbing on so many levels yet funny. I think the sicker people are in the head the more creative and innovative they are in movies, literature, and life. If your interested in the joke umm I will post a link that will take you to a site you can learn about the joke then choice if you want to read any.

dont click unless your interested in the filthiest joke in the world

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