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Poetry

Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 7:28 pm
by flowergirlajg


Just some poetry I wrote! Let me know what you think.



Love

What is unbreakable?
What is constant?
What does the world need more of?
The world needs Love.
What keeps families glued tightly together?
What is contagious but good?
What does the word need more of?
Love.


War

War.
What is war?
War is usual now.
War is not panicked about when heard of now.
War is pain.
War is hate.
War needs love.
War needs compassion.
Why?
Why have war?
Why kill?
Why not act civil?
Why?
Why?

Blindness

Blindness.
Blindness is Darkness.
Blindness is Terror.
Blindness is Confusion.
Blindness is Beauty.
Not seeing the hate of Man.
Not seeing the pain of life.
Not seeing the faces of people of suffering.
Yet,
Blindness is also not seeing your loved ones.
Blindness is not seeing love.
Blindness is not seeing smiles.
Would you rather be blind
Or see?


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Poetry

Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 4:37 am
by Superman
I like it but its quite depressing

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Poetry

Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2007 10:09 am
by flowergirlajg
yeeeeeeah I know. Thanks though! They are depressing, im not good at writing happy ones... I'll try though!

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