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Posted: **Wed Jan 25, 2006 11:33 am**

This is another new poem of mine. see if you like it too!

enjoy

In The Darkness
By: Ashley Loyd

In the darkness …
You belong to me.

In the darkness…
You can’t escape me.

You move swiftly not making a sound,
And not knowing I can see everywhere
You go, every move you make.

I sit and watch you…waiting to make
My move, while you’re running around
Like a mouse lost in a maze.

In the darkness, you are now lost…
Now paralyzed.

You give into my space. You know
There’s only room for one.
You finally give into the darkness
You finally have admitted defeat…
I have won.

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Posted: **Wed Jan 25, 2006 12:09 pm**

nice, very nice....i like...

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Posted: **Wed Jan 25, 2006 4:28 pm**

interesting

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Posted: **Wed Jan 25, 2006 4:42 pm**

Cool, it's very... dark.

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Posted: **Wed Jan 25, 2006 4:46 pm**

lol yes, keep all the depressed and suicidal people away from this forum!!! its a good poem though!!

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Posted: **Wed Jan 25, 2006 7:00 pm**

highly doubt if anyone kills theirself over a poem I wrote...especially on this forum. haha. BUT thanx!

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Posted: **Wed Jan 25, 2006 7:01 pm**

Red Squirrel wrote: Cool, it's very... dark.

wow, Red! you cease to amaze me. YOU'RE SUCHA SMART PERSON!

just messin' with ya

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Posted: **Wed Jan 25, 2006 7:27 pm**

unbreakable wrote: highly doubt if anyone kills theirself over a poem I wrote...especially on this forum. haha. BUT thanx!

hahahaha...GG might

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Posted: **Wed Jan 25, 2006 7:43 pm**

maybe...hrmmm...

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Posted: **Wed Jan 25, 2006 9:55 pm**

Minnie wrote:
unbreakable wrote: highly doubt if anyone kills theirself over a poem I wrote...especially on this forum. haha. BUT thanx!

hahahaha...GG might

hahaha! :goalguarder: there he goes

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Posted: **Thu Jan 26, 2006 6:56 am**

hahahahha

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Posted: **Thu Jan 26, 2006 7:46 am**

crap...

someone is gonna take heat for this one. ....

ahhhh oh well

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Posted: **Thu Jan 26, 2006 1:23 pm**

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Posted: **Thu Jan 26, 2006 4:08 pm**

should we have a funeral for him?

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Posted: **Thu Jan 26, 2006 4:54 pm**

depends..how many ppl would show up?

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Posted: **Thu Jan 26, 2006 6:17 pm**

I hate to go to funerals..but just for GG i would go

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Posted: **Thu Jan 26, 2006 8:01 pm**

me 2. I hate funerals too. I hope I've been to my last one for a while my last one did me over..it was my fathers.

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Posted: **Thu Jan 26, 2006 8:35 pm**

unbreakable wrote: me 2. I hate funerals too. I hope I've been to my last one for a while my last one did me over..it was my fathers.

i'm so sorry...i can't imagine how difficult that would be. I have lost people i been close to but no that close to my heart. i guess it's a part of life but man....again i'm so sorry for you loss.

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Posted: **Fri Jan 27, 2006 3:57 am**

poems are amazing, just the other day at work we were talking about authors. Mostly people like Edgar Allan Poe who's work was dark and how tragic their lives were but if it wasn't for the tragic acts and events in their lives we would be without the great works from such authors.

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Posted: **Fri Jan 27, 2006 7:08 am**

VictorEM83 wrote: poems are amazing, just the other day at work we were talking about authors. Mostly people like Edgar Allan Poe who's work was dark and how tragic their lives were but if it wasn't for the tragic acts and events in their lives we would be without the great works from such authors.

You said it! I love Edgar A Poe!!! Him and Nathanial Hawthorne. They are my two favorites.

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Posted: **Fri Jan 27, 2006 3:59 pm**

yeah edgar allan poe has some great poems and stories

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Posted: **Fri Jan 27, 2006 9:09 pm**

yea!!!!!

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Posted: **Sun Jan 29, 2006 5:22 am**

After I watched a movie last nite (the Aristocrats) I had a total wow moment how really disturbing some of the people who give us some of the greatest works. Being so crude, vile, and disturbing on so many levels yet funny. I think the sicker people are in the head the more creative and innovative they are in movies, literature, and life. If your interested in the joke umm I will post a link that will take you to a site you can learn about the joke then choice if you want to read any.

dont click unless your interested in the filthiest joke in the world

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