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story for chicken soup

Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2004 2:59 pm
by Angel
Anyone heard of the book(s) Chicken soup??? Well I'm trying to write a story for them on family matters but its SO hard cause all the stuff that happened in the story are from SO long ago so im gonna post it below tell me how to spice it up??

Like Mother,Like Daughter.

People always say like mother,like daughter but that quote defenitly does not apply here.My sister,Charity,grew up not knowing her father, I guess all along she thought it was my mothers fault.My sister at age 15,smart talented and looking wide into the horizon, then we moved back to what everyone "thought" was Charity's fathers,Les.My mother was having a hard time with my father arguing and tipical split up parents reasons ut Charity hated that completly.....My mother was told by her she was moving out when she turned 16,and she did.She was angry at my mother.Charity met a man named Josh Bracy, As my sister grew more angry at my mother she wanted to take me away,as my mother says she brain washed me into thinking life would be "peaches and cream" with her. The "brain washing" worked because I moved in with her and Josh.Charity found later on she was pregant,she came back to mt mom for help,of course my mom took her AND Josh back in.My mom planned her baby shower,helped her in delivery

Any good???

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story for chicken soup

Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2004 6:11 pm
by manadren
I would help you but I can't really be bothered to try to read it. Proper punctuation is your friend, or rather you do know that things like commas and periods are usually followed by a space. It keeps things from running together.

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