Yay poetry!

Shinizo · Post by **Shinizo** » Mon Jun 27, 2005 12:07 am

I have composed a new masterpiece!

A broken heart is a world destroyed,
Another life that has been toyed.
Greed and suffering beyond comprehension,
Built upon your mind, extreme tension.
You swallow your lies,
You forget your fears,
You can't see infront of your blinded eyes.
You are seen by the deaf, heard by the dumb.
Talked to the dead, your mind is numb.
Noone has a soul in your eyes, noone is dear.
Blinded by suffocation, you forgot all your fears.

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Joe · Post by **Joe** » Mon Jun 27, 2005 12:24 am

I don't like Poetry.

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Clueless · Post by **Clueless** » Mon Jun 27, 2005 7:29 am

uhh, i dont get it

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Red Squirrel · Post by **Red Squirrel** » Mon Jun 27, 2005 9:38 am

Clueless wrote: uhh, i dont get it

That's the whole point of poetry.

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Shinizo · Post by **Shinizo** » Mon Jun 27, 2005 10:26 am

Yep! XD It doesn't really serve a meaning to anything!

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Shinizo · Post by **Shinizo** » Mon Jun 27, 2005 12:01 pm

Yay, another poem!

A day goes by,
And still I see,
What has gone by,
What isn't me.
And throughout my years,
Even though I didn't know..
You could see right through my eyes..
Everytime I cried.
And I spill out my heart, and hide my fangs,
I'll never hurt you again.
I turn back the clock,
just to rewind time,
Just so I could be with you..
One last time.
And even though it was just a dream,
We both shared it.
We both cared for it.
We made it happen.
Taking all those long years and endings,
Times where I was confused, always pending..
I realize now, that I kept myself from you,
A trust noone knew..
And I hid my fangs deep inside.
And even though you can see right through me,
And you believe all those tears I cried were meaningless..
I still stand high on this mountain,
And I spill my heart out for you.

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Shinizo · Post by **Shinizo** » Sat Jul 02, 2005 12:33 am

Aaaaand, I made another!

Even though I still can't see your eyes,
The way the glisten when the sun shines.
Every thought I have, about you or not,
I forget what I've done, why everything is this way.
Have I forgotton?
Do I not understand?
Was I not even born of this land?
Do I make sense when I cry,
Do my words come out straight?
Can I make you feel the same way about me,
For my own heart's sake?
Can I see things differently,
Even though you're not here?
The answer may be unknown,
But what I know is clear.
I know I can't prove to you,
As you can see right through me.
Your eyes stick to me like glue,
But you will never see.
You're blinded by your thoughts,
Your rage, anger and fears.
Even I have forgotton why I came here.
But the answers may always lie unknown,
But what I know is clear.
I wouldn't be here today,
Not without you, dear.

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Minnie · Post by **Minnie** » Sun Jul 03, 2005 8:54 pm

ahhhhhh I love peotry. Nice job. Thanks for sharing. Someday I might share some of mine too.

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Clueless · Post by **Clueless** » Mon Jul 04, 2005 10:20 am

who are you talking to in the poem

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Anonymous · Post by **Anonymous** » Mon Jul 04, 2005 10:35 am

Old McDonald had a farm, e-i-e-i-o!

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Shinizo · Post by **Shinizo** » Mon Jul 04, 2005 11:56 am

Lol, does it MATTER who I'm talking to?

I'm talking to Ol' McDonald. He left me with his kids, and wouldn't come back to me. Stole my tractor, and left with the money.

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Clueless · Post by **Clueless** » Mon Jul 04, 2005 12:30 pm

poor old mcdonald

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Shinizo · Post by **Shinizo** » Mon Jul 04, 2005 12:49 pm

Should've set him on fire.

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Clueless · Post by **Clueless** » Mon Jul 04, 2005 12:52 pm

fire!

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Shinizo · Post by **Shinizo** » Mon Jul 04, 2005 12:53 pm

OFF TOPIC!

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Clueless · Post by **Clueless** » Mon Jul 04, 2005 12:54 pm

you started it

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Shinizo · Post by **Shinizo** » Mon Jul 04, 2005 12:56 pm

And I finished it.

I'm writing a new poem, dunno how it's going now, though. It's just all jumbles of inspiration.

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Clueless · Post by **Clueless** » Mon Jul 04, 2005 1:03 pm

what are you being inspired by?

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Shinizo · Post by **Shinizo** » Mon Jul 04, 2005 1:04 pm

My new friend in real life? Lol, I dunno. Sometimes from lyrics, sometimes from her. Who knows.

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Clueless · Post by **Clueless** » Mon Jul 04, 2005 1:06 pm

whats her name

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Shinizo · Post by **Shinizo** » Mon Jul 04, 2005 1:09 pm

Her name is Kayla. She has a sister named Sammy too.

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Clueless · Post by **Clueless** » Mon Jul 04, 2005 1:10 pm

i have a friend named kaila!!!! lol its just spelled different. shes moving to tennessee though

:(

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Shinizo · Post by **Shinizo** » Mon Jul 04, 2005 1:11 pm

Lol. Tennessee. My sister's ex-husband lives in Nashville, but we're going off topic >.>

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